Read but between words
I will cease to exist
if words made no sense
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I like this poem … much of life in incomprehensible … denies understanding and explanation … disappears, slips through out
Sumita, your meaningful poem has inspired me to write another. Thank you!
As Tagore said, in poetry words need to cease to signify individual meanings, but should reflect ‘feelings' and make a collective sense. Lovely forthright poem.
Life slips through our fingers, disappears, without explanation or meaning … we sense this, feel this intuitively. Well done … Dennis