Wednesday, April 6, 2022

I Will Write Till You Read Comments

Rating: 5.0

Read but between words
I will cease to exist
if words made no sense
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Sumita Jetley
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Dennis Ryan 13 November 2024

Life slips through our fingers, disappears, without explanation or meaning … we sense this, feel this intuitively. Well done … Dennis

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Dennis Ryan 13 November 2024

I like this poem … much of life in incomprehensible … denies understanding and explanation … disappears, slips through out

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Richard Wlodarski 06 April 2022

Sumita, your meaningful poem has inspired me to write another. Thank you!

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Sumita Jetley 07 April 2022

I am glad & touched by the emotion.

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As Tagore said, in poetry words need to cease to signify individual meanings, but should reflect ‘feelings' and make a collective sense. Lovely forthright poem.

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