Thursday, January 17, 2019

I Will Wait For You-Hope Comments

Rating: 5.0

I will wait for you as
the ruins wait for travelers.
I will wait for you as
the sea wait for rivers.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Ricky Magnathen 01 May 2021

Poetic gem for sensual writing.

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T Rajan Evol 07 September 2020

Wonderful poem on wait....I liked all verses.10+

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Shreya Hacks 21 January 2019

to run my fingers along the contours of your body just to ignite the love. I will wait for you even though it is hard to remain patient, And wait for eternity

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Suzon Albert 18 January 2019

Something to live for and everything to die with, So well written, Asim.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 January 2019

to run my fingers along the contours of your body just to ignite the love. very sensuous poetry I AM A POET ROMANTIC Shall wait for thee in eternity hope we exchange our bodies as JA WANTED ME to be thanks for the inspiration ye have given me we may meet only in dreams and memories abide till then with me I will be what you want me to be but will you wait that long for me I wonder in quandry 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++= can't give more sorry be kindly excuse me

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 January 2019

With great hope ruins wait for travelers. Love always keeps hope for waiting. When a person waits, this expresses his patience. To keep dreams alive waiting is necessary. Wonderful message is transferred through this poem....10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 January 2019

A lovely write that powerfully expresses hope and optimistic spirit! Well penned my friend...10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 17 January 2019

A well crafted free verse...................

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M. Asim Nehal

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