Sunday, October 11, 2009

I Will Wait For Sunset…. Comments

Rating: 3.1

I will wait for sunset, yes sunset,
for it is then that
all creatures return home to their beloved,
and i too will return to the welcoming
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Satarupa Rudrapal
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Allemagne Roßmann 17 October 2009

Outstanding flow of words technically and usage of realistic acclimatisations to portray them as well.I like the analysis.10 for it anyway.

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Sonya Florentino 11 October 2009

just from the title, I knew I was going to like this poem...I was wrong....I love it! ... one small suggestion thou...the last line, maybe you can just say ' to fill mine with happiness' :)

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