Thursday, July 7, 2011

I Will Trust, Again Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pay me to trust, really, pay me with a blank check
on a platter, make it a sweet story just to trust
fix my history, mould my present
hold my future, meet my prequisite just to trust
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Adedolapo Olisa
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Elizabeth Grace 08 August 2011

Gorgeous. Thank you for writing. Keep it up :)

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Romeo Della Valle 08 August 2011

Impressive! A very spiritually touching poem that brings magic to your words! Well penned and poignant! Thanks for sharing! Keep it up! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Clara Odelia Ciutara 07 July 2011

A greatly written poem. It really is a good poem about trust. I really like the part 'pay me to trust' It's lovely

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Adedolapo Olisa

Adedolapo Olisa

Ilorin, Kwara state.
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