I will touch you as
breeze touches the tender leaves
or water touches a shoal of fish
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TOUCH! TOUCH! ! TOUCH! ! ! All touches have become a ‘Touch-Stone’ I’m feeling tone and tune of ‘Touch-Stone’. Lithe and nubile Ten++ dr. sakti Thanks for comments and rating and expecting the same on my poems if you please.
superb poetic material there amazed an impressed at a loss o words.. cheers
I will touch you as breeze touches the tender leaves or water touches a shoal of fish hmmm a very perfect poem done in the flow of poetic melody... like it very much..the ideas is rich and brain feeling... great poetry... really I mean it..
ya touching with grace that all matters. we hold the same views differently. i have written 'Touc me not' i rate this as 10
And when is that going to happen with your latin love...French-like slurred speeches......I like the subject of 'I will touch you' Or is it like this -' WETTE PAINTE_ TOUCHE NOTTE'.....connoting a budding love yet to go a long way or it is just as wet as a drenched cat to dry up before mewing the sounds of love.
Dear Anjali Read this poem as well along with Wine of Health but liked this one better. The similis that you have given are superb and the touch that you have described only a poet's heart can visualise. Chhavi anupam am a woman like you of course much much senior in age!
this is soooooooooooo... brilliant! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
again.... what a lyrical genius! these lines carress the romantic in me... ' I will touch you as Love touches the lover’s heart or Artist touches his piece of art.'
I will touch you as Divine grace touche its devotee or Rivers touch her beloved sea. I will touch you……………… m touched wid des lines......10+++++++++
The verve that each word instills makes this a paradigm of beautiful poetry.
Touch, the feel all beautifully mentioned in your poem. I feel the touch of your mesmeric words
Its a beautiful day over evrywhere. wish i could touch u once in lifetime and which make me cause for life. As I stepped outside this morning the ground was filled with frost. The coolness and crisp fresh breaths(U) I take make me feel alive! TC
Oh this is good! Great bit of writing with lovely imagery and smooth flowing words. Well done!