Monday, December 29, 2008

*** I Will Touch You- *** Comments

Rating: 4.9

I will touch you as
breeze touches the tender leaves
or water touches a shoal of fish
...
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ANJALI SINHA
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Terry Dawson 01 October 2015

Oh this is good! Great bit of writing with lovely imagery and smooth flowing words. Well done!

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Rahul Aithal 05 August 2010

I am touched. Great write, Anjali. Rahul.

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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 21 September 2009

TOUCH! TOUCH! ! TOUCH! ! ! All touches have become a ‘Touch-Stone’ I’m feeling tone and tune of ‘Touch-Stone’. Lithe and nubile Ten++ dr. sakti Thanks for comments and rating and expecting the same on my poems if you please.

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Anand Madhukar 21 September 2009

Beautifully imaginative comparisons...

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Siddharth Singh 10 July 2009

Magical touch by anjali.

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Subroto Chatterjee 24 May 2009

Thanks...for touching me... Cheers. Subroto

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Saadat Tahir 14 May 2009

superb poetic material there amazed an impressed at a loss o words.. cheers

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Afzal Shauq 10 May 2009

I will touch you as breeze touches the tender leaves or water touches a shoal of fish hmmm a very perfect poem done in the flow of poetic melody... like it very much..the ideas is rich and brain feeling... great poetry... really I mean it..

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 April 2009

ya touching with grace that all matters. we hold the same views differently. i have written 'Touc me not' i rate this as 10

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Allemagne Roßmann 13 April 2009

And when is that going to happen with your latin love...French-like slurred speeches......I like the subject of 'I will touch you' Or is it like this -' WETTE PAINTE_ TOUCHE NOTTE'.....connoting a budding love yet to go a long way or it is just as wet as a drenched cat to dry up before mewing the sounds of love.

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Chhavi Anupam 31 March 2009

Dear Anjali Read this poem as well along with Wine of Health but liked this one better. The similis that you have given are superb and the touch that you have described only a poet's heart can visualise. Chhavi anupam am a woman like you of course much much senior in age!

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this is soooooooooooo... brilliant! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Yassar Ali 06 February 2009

10/10 Love the repetition of i will touch you as

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Wanelisa Albert 03 February 2009

again.... what a lyrical genius! these lines carress the romantic in me... ' I will touch you as Love touches the lover’s heart or Artist touches his piece of art.'

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Mahfooz Ali 22 January 2009

I will touch you as Divine grace touche its devotee or Rivers touch her beloved sea. I will touch you……………… m touched wid des lines......10+++++++++

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Cupid Missed! 20 January 2009

The verve that each word instills makes this a paradigm of beautiful poetry.

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Sasidharan Vellat Menon 20 January 2009

Touch, the feel all beautifully mentioned in your poem. I feel the touch of your mesmeric words

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Sandeep Patil 18 January 2009

Its a beautiful day over evrywhere. wish i could touch u once in lifetime and which make me cause for life. As I stepped outside this morning the ground was filled with frost. The coolness and crisp fresh breaths(U) I take make me feel alive! TC

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Sarwar Chowdhury 13 January 2009

T O U C H E D PAGLEEEEEE THE GREAT! !

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Akram Awadat 12 January 2009

very nice poem i like it

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