I Will Teach You... Comments

well written - nice poem

dare you instigate some eternal learner..! ! ! ! ! ! wow..! !

a good teacher and good lessons of love to teach. well penned.

W O W! ... I Loved This Poem, From Beginning To End... Excellent Write... Flames of Passion Poured From This Pen! ... and Yet, Not Tawdry, but Sensuous, It had a purity of Love Rising Above more than the physical... Going Into My Fav's (Now, Why Didn't You Email Me This One (smile - just kidding) Poet-Friends MoonBee

Very well written...keep it up!

ode to love, which makes everthing possible realy nice

Very sentimental and full of love... beautiful write.........10

how... how to love me... to love me just to be always my sweetheart... just to be always and forever my only queen... ..i`ll teach you....oh dear really teach me how the sweetness is added in life... so beautiful creation and to be loved by all is i think maincriteria.... i loved it.....10 readmine what do i seek....humble submission

Your poems move readers. Finding the right words is like searching for a favorite missing sock...once found, a sense of joy follows.

just to be always and forever my only queen... ..i`ll teach you... Rachel Ann Butler

Lovely poem that speaks of one who loves and want to teach her everything there is to know about what love truly is-it has a life of it's own that experiences pain, sorrows, heartaches, anger, hate...all the emotions of life will be taught - the narrator is a good teacher, no doubt with your patience, she'll learn

This is a beautiful poem writen by a love sick young man whose heart broken wanting everyone to understand how he felt. Any mistakes are out weighted by all with in the poem and what it says. No-one can express themselves better or clearer then this poet. I pray that he becomes the most successful poet in the world.

love it so much! ! ! ! ! ! ! you used deep words...

you make me fall in love reading this poem. the emotions show the love in the poem. if this poem would get its proper structure, editing..etc it could compete with the best classical poems. i cannot touch it though.... for me it has sanctity. may i compare you to neruda? thanks for your poem. keep writing.

Fabulous! ! ! You have already taught so many by such a fantastic presentation....keep writing...i wud love to read more

believe me, i'm out of words, for nothing else 2 be said after these words.

this is gorgeous. i love it.

wow wow that is sooooooooooooooo beautiful...i luv it! ! ! :)

GOOD WORK, but let me teach you to love unconditionally look beyond outward beauty, through the eyes and into the heart. genuine love comes from within.giving and sharing freely.

'i will teach you' - the no-title contains the meaning and the idea. There are some attractive mistakes, probably made intentionally, and a very cool sense of dominating over the girl. I like it.