Tuesday, September 30, 2008

I Will Survive.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Every time I see a couple I remember her
Every day when people meet I remember her
Every single night I walk alone out there
How can I forget her body how can I forget the hair
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Yasser Koor
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Indira Renganathan 18 September 2009

A hearty yearning for a love-survival...wish you be blessed...nice reading...thank you

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Salu Salu 03 December 2008

yasser, in the world in the life one encounters a lot of oddities that make the fun of living.....accept as it comes then you'll find it blessing....we experience a lot of amazings wonders unusuals....later all become no wonder no amazing no unusual...... experience all moods......best wishes/salu

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&&angel4ever && 14 October 2008

As it said nopain no gain so you have to feel it to know whats happiness and at the end of the tannel there is light and hope you have to believe it

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Blue Eyes 11 October 2008

what can be said about such about a poem that led me crying into bed waw, i mean its great

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Kesav Easwaran 08 October 2008

a good write 'strong willed' on survival...emotions well expressed in well framed lines...good work, Yasser...10

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Shimon Weinroth 08 October 2008

I am sure you will survive, a poem of urgent emotions that you seem to come to grips with, do cntinue your search,10 (do you mean enchain or un chain) ? a poets right to coin new words

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Little Hatila ;) 08 October 2008

wow...you can forget about her for sure, let her go i think this poem is a piece of gold...keep going 10 Hataw

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Mohammad Al-kurdi 05 October 2008

what other words should be said to someone knows that life has no end when a person leave him 'dead'... i say no drink no weed 'cause you say'But now if she comes back to me, , , really I don’t care ' well-done piece of writing dude...............keep working.

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Anjali Sinha 30 September 2008

very nice poem but please dont take to weed +10 regards anjalie (do read mine ALL I SEE IS YOU and others)

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Shimon Weinroth 30 September 2008

filled with the agony of love's emotions, interesting do continue, there are some minor spelling mistakes do check them out cheer up

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