Tuesday, November 14, 2017

I Will Suck Your Tears Comments

Rating: 4.0

Tears running down your rosy cheeks
start a hal chal in my dil
how they yearn for your tears
my dry parching lips!
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Ravi Kopra
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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 14 November 2017

This is a beautiful poem. Loved the way you have put your heart out

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Bernard F. Asuncion 14 November 2017

Such a lovely write, Ravi... a full 10+++++

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Chris Smart 14 November 2017

Your poem is heartfelt.

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