Monday, October 1, 2012

I Will Search For You My Love Comments

Rating: 4.6

O, I will search for you, my love,
Whenever all the world is done
When earth no more shall spin around
As at the dying of the sun
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Valerie Dohren
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Spiritual Seeker 09 October 2012

Very beautiful indeed..thanks for sharing!

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Allemagne Roßmann 09 October 2012

Really frantic search its going to be as the readers frenzied here the throng.Superb write

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Doug Bentley 07 October 2012

for a too brief moment, Dante's Beatrice lifts her skirt.

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Neela Nath Das 06 October 2012

I loved the abcb scheme.Romantic touch in your poem is always an added beauty.Kudos!

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Stevie Taite 06 October 2012

Dreamlike imagery used to full effect! A love that never dies, but sings on and on in a timeless space. Magical and beyond anything Earthly.

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Kevin East 04 October 2012

I am impressed Valerie..great! Kevin.

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Bursting with beauty! A great song of love. Well done my friend!

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John Brown 02 October 2012

Another great piece Val. Beautifully put.

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Heather Wilson 01 October 2012

A beautiful poem, romance is in the air.lovely

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Danny Draper 01 October 2012

No love could be stronger than this, a very fine write.

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Valsa George 01 October 2012

You and your loved one entwined as one climbing to heaven's door with the sweet refrain of bird's song drowning the air around and all the hearts that ever loved joining you as a band! ! What a sublime and celestial experience ! !

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Dave Walker 01 October 2012

true loves will always find each other, no matter how long it takes. A fantastic poem.

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