I Will Run To You Comments
Tear the sky apart and
come down, so that I can
run to you for refuge;
People's best action is filthy
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I would use " people's evil actions" " verb.. bare uncover (a part of the body or other thing) and expose it to view." even i get bear and bare confused! so, i say use " I bare my soul and heart to you" Here: " flood that is past" ..i think " passed" is proper. " past" is not to be used as a verb, if that's what you were doing. OCEAN? that can be deep! to MyPoemList bri :)
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7/20/2025 6:11:34 AM # 1.0.0
I would use " people's evil actions" " verb.. bare uncover (a part of the body or other thing) and expose it to view." even i get bear and bare confused! so, i say use " I bare my soul and heart to you" Here: " flood that is past" ..i think " passed" is proper. " past" is not to be used as a verb, if that's what you were doing. OCEAN? that can be deep! to MyPoemList bri :)
Thank you the mistake were so obvious and I never saw them. Keep the comment/editingcoming I appreciate that. Have a lovely day. O and I made the changes