Thursday, December 10, 2009

' I Will Remember ' Comments

Rating: 2.6

Sit down near to me and show me you care,
Say that you love me and that you'll always be there.
I can't forget you, so won't you come back again..
I don't want to believe that you're already dead.
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Unnikrishnan E S 04 September 2016

Marvellous poem of love and separation. Well penned. Congrats.

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Sherri Coulter 01 July 2010

We move in and out of many others lives, sometimes for a short duration, only to be re-united. The Universe is totally speaking to you at these times...listen. I will never forget.

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Dickson Mseti 23 April 2010

love is all about memories, hard to delete.And that makes it alive.

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Tanvi Damle 17 March 2010

it tuk my breath away...luvd da way u wrote it...realli gud

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Whispering Rose 28 January 2010

great poem i really enjoyed it..'i'll love you forever, i don't care what is love's meaning' i love this part... we often don't know what is true love...is it the one that lasts long or the one that hurts when it's gone

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Tanya Stanford 30 December 2009

true love for a lost one could not have been written more beautifully. Sorry for your loss.

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Dinesh Mukherji 10 December 2009

it seems nothing said, and parted upon, may be you remember whether she/he remember that? shunted out with other part? who knows, you poem did speak.

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Richard Jarboe 10 December 2009

sweet tribute to a memory. good work, richard

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Pink Butterfly ... 10 December 2009

I can feel your suffering from this piece! Release yourself from it. You deserve to be happy! God bless! -Pink Butterfly-

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