I Will Remain Your Sun Comments

This is a wonderful poem, Liza, and its source is your deep spirit. Only a person with a really big heart which embraces others with a genuine altruism - and I include Jesus and the saints in that embrace - can write so abundantly. And there's delightful humor! I smiled at the names and traits of the children, truly products of their parents! And the last stanza - your understanding and compassion abound. Those last two lines, dear Liza - can only be written by someone who has faith, an abiding faith in a blessed force acting to redress wrongs and restore happiness to those who deserve it. I don't know if I am so worthy, but your poem makes me feel grateful to that force of goodness - whether that happiness comes true or not. Your poem has put the most blessed feelings in my heart and now I do not want to commit any bad act which would expel them, I want to nourish them with good acts. The hand that wrote this poem is also the hand that gives, the mind that conceived these good things is a harbor of generosity.

Amazing poem dedicated to love and lovely relationships and look at the ecstasy it is going to bring in their life. Thanks. I quote: who after losing all - got a twice better life,

Oh how sweet....I love the anticipation....a little family...beautiful...