Friday, July 8, 2011

I Will Remain Faithful To You.. Whatever You Do Comments

Rating: 4.8

Now we've arrived to the end of the road
No one can feel the weight of the load
We were chosen to be forever on the road
But you chose for me to be abroad
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Nia Schexnider 06 December 2013

[3 this is beautiful. I am happy that you write these things because I often felt this way too. keep um coming :)

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 07 November 2013

Wow the rhymin here is fabulous. Such a poetic sincere luv poem, dramatic ending enjoyable to read. Do read any of mine n tel me if u like any too

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Heather Wilkins 21 June 2013

another master piece of poetry. you are very talent writer. just lovely

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Moha Abbou 06 September 2012

Danta mawso3et kalimat ya a5i

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Jessie Hopkins 16 November 2011

Your words are beautiful. Truly. And not just that but meaningful. :) Thank you for sharing.

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Redneck 3 10 November 2011

now this one is incredible: D love it your really good with your words

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Debra Martin 16 August 2011

Incredible that's all I can say, you definitely have a way with words....

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isatou Juwara 07 August 2011

what a talent! ! hey look, this poem is just cool!

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Katelin Offord Harper 25 July 2011

a beautiful poem i cant stop thinkin bout it i really like it

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Christina Phan 24 July 2011

awww its beautiful poem and sweet You are such good person being there for her This is my favorite and well written

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Noha Ahmad 23 July 2011

really beautiful one

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Cyber Lion 22 July 2011

I'll have to come back and read, read then re-read it some more, I feel the message but there's something that leaves it a bit short

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Chris Jibero 20 July 2011

'.....without you I will have a reason to die.' So punchy!

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Jennifer .. 19 July 2011

good sweet-sadish poem :) great job

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Hans Vr 19 July 2011

Yes, very good style. Well written.

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Luz Hanaii 18 July 2011

This poem shows your true loving heart...wish more people were true friends like that. True friendship is a rare diamond and not everyone can find it.

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Hilton Ball 18 July 2011

i like that man i like it alot that made me happy :)

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Santosh Sharma 18 July 2011

A deep feeling sense of friendship , good one

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Merna Ibrahim 18 July 2011

Nice poem about the real friendship :) Good job!

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Very nice. You arent bad at all.

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