Wednesday, June 25, 2008

I Will Rape Thee Comments

Rating: 2.7

I will rape thee-
With my savage love;
Born from the rural pot.
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Kyle Shield Laster
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Jasbir Chatterjee 09 July 2015

Your poems contain a compressed form of violence. Even love has a certain beastly aspect to it. In this poem, you describe savageness born from a rural pot. I beg to differ on this. A rural pot need not be an uncouth one.

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Faye Coon 15 March 2012

i like it! the desire to rape is a very real thing and i dont think it should be witheld. better on paper than in real life! [3 your amazing!

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Greenwolfe 1962 26 June 2008

I'm not sure I know what you mean by the 'rural pot'. I can't imagine it being a compliment to anything rural. Some people just can't stop themselves from walking on thin ice. GW62

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(: God's Wild Child :) 25 June 2008

i like it. not what im used to but its good. good job.

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Emancipation Planz 25 June 2008

Tis never nice to glorify rape... having experienced it by two guys about your age...! !

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Falease Anderson 25 June 2008

Gosh, I can feel the obsession. Whoever the poet is portraying should really get a hold of his emotions or they will rot-in prison.

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Kyle Shield Laster

Kyle Shield Laster

Clarksdale, Mississippi
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