I Will Not Need To Cheat Comments

A Pied Piper if you will, donned in holy array, By leading mediocrity of incompetence astray, Perfection is an art that many have lost in time, Yet we choose to move forward if only in mind...very nice and great poetry perfection, the desire not to mediocre in all that we do is the first step towards greatness.. thank u dear poet. tony

a WISE pen! strong messages Thanks For Sharing!

the poem is well written- measurement and rhythm is applied. and the message of the poem is of honesty and sincerity. keep it up my dear poet friend...the legacy of poetry is noble and ancient- the are gift of passion and devotion... all the best

Great write in form and structure with wisdom as placid as the future thanks for sharing

it is the best of yours i think......you are developing very fast.....waiting to see you a great poet in the future if you kept developing....write more obed...

Nobody want to feel gulity. But you're right about having to have the wisdom in order to be free. Great poem!

You only cheat yourself, if you cheat on a test.

a nice way to be honest, don't cheat on anything, honesty is the best policy so to speak. A wonderful write, impressed by your rhymes, strong, not forced. Excellent!

Congratulation! a natural wisdom imbued in your heart.....so real and life needs not but a person like you...God bless...a 10 +

Very good. I am inspired. I shall read more and more poems of you.

Good to know that you are a lover of truth, So hold your head up high, as an honest man should! - Raj

This would make a good 'rap', I think.

wonderful poem, Obed, deep ideas well embedded to convey the message.......10+++++++

You have good thoughts Obed and I hope it all works out for you... Ruthie

first thank u for ur invitation. it deserves to be shown and appreciated. ur already free coz u have got a free soul. ur not afraid to face the truth. isn`t it sth ones must have to become a man of his dream? keep ur lever high

True poem written from the heart of one who doesn't want the feeling of guilt. The fact of being cognizance of the affects and effects of guilt...the narrator will do the right thing and every thing will be fine...a 10+++

Hi Obed - whenever we do something wrong - it produces guilt. By always trying to do what is right 'We become the best' 'We become free' 'We will great and good if we make the right choices'. I love the ending 'I don't want the feeling of guilt - because of the truth I am built'. Jesus said 'I am the WAY the TRUTH and the LIFE'. If we follow Him and His teaching - we will walk in the way of truth - and we will live a good life'. Nice structure with some good ryme and rythm. I score it MAX. Yours in poetry - JOHN

GREAT TO SEE THAT YOU LIKE TO DO THE RIGHT THING. MAKING THE RIGHT CHOICES THAT IS SALUBRIOUS TO YOUR SOUL AND YOUR PSYCHE.

great message of relying upon one's powers

Not wanting cheat by taking the easy means to do so, but wisdom tells you to be true to yourself with the faith to carry on to succeed through hard work. That done to achieve your goal, no room for the feeling of guilt to surface. Insightful.