I Will Not Forget You...A Valentine Piece Comments

Your soul is like the river flows right to the enormous Ocean.A splendid creature! !

Open your hearts to rainbow of tears As you open your mind to many fears the picture of fulfillment is in your face I miss you truly please be here............................. page seems doused by rain as heart reneged by tears yet beauty emblazons heart still mirror loses grace of love by void, wonderful write through amazing imagery and metaphors flowing though ingenuity, yet of unique genre,10+++++, thanks for sharing

I enjoyed this poem, the way you weaved the different parts of nature with your feelings and thoughts. You have certainly poured out your feelings with this one. Ben

Very flowing poem for Valentines... the last line makes it into an unrequited love you have a feel for this poem hope its not you thanks for the read regards

Hi Lady G - I like this poem - it reminds us of the transience of Valentine Messeges. We come and go through peoples lives and poeple come and go through ours - sometimes the impact is greater and we send a Valentine Card in 2000 but not in 2001 and never again or maybe this year ? ? I love the ending. Open your hearts to rainbow of tears As you open your mind to many fears The picture of fulfillment is in your face I miss you truely - be here! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! We all need each otehr in this World Lady G but in PH we can be there for each other Love in Poetry - JOHN

nice! i love 8! hihihihiihiihihihi Make oder poem as good as what you published

Very poetic, Excellent, And beautifully express Well done