I Will Not Be There Comments

Ah- but we cannot return. How sad and yet you have written it so well. Is it not just the way life is and must be else how would we reach that grand concluesion? Read mine - Sonnet Beyond Love - and notice that subtle twist on the eighth line. Adeline

This is so beautifully moving. It reminded me of Pablo Neruda...passion abounding through words. I found myself lost in an old love...the friction...the desire...and, ultimately, the scorn. Very nice imagery. :) I truly enjoyed the read. :) BJ

Another fantastic poem. // footprints in heart and mind//. Wow amazing..and you maintained a beautiful emotion from top to bottom, , ,

Strikingly beautiful, but is this not expected, at this point? Your poetry is legendary, continue on, Monsieur.

I have read through some of your poems and honestly can see the depth in your words. I also read your biography and truth be told, i felt a thing within me. I have read some of the comments that followed your poems and my conclusion is that...some are born before their time and i can say your one of them.. I feel your pain in every word, the truth in your lines and the cut out emotions that follows every dream, every thought expressed here.. Thank u for taking me on this journey with you. Peace and Blessings to you!

Jason Jenny is right, this poem is something cool to read.....The title just attractive and it more fluently utter your emotion, speak all inside the contents...The end just so nice, so that's enough to say this is cool writing Romeo..Keep more and more poems to come_Unwritten Soul