Friday, September 11, 2015

I Will Not Be Broken Comments

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I don't know why we ever started,
except that it was what you wanted.
But now it is time that I departed
on a road that I have charted.
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Alesia Leach
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Jessica Nichols 21 July 2018

You can have no idea just how this relates to my last year. Wow, literally looking over my shoulder.... lol... Excellent write Alesia...

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Trinity Baldwin 21 July 2018

Alesia, this is deep and mighty strong of you. Sometimes, I wish I could be that strong. But I am a weak human... Love the poem.

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Valsa George 13 September 2015

At times, life becomes hazardous...... When no compromise is in view, better to part ways. There is no guarantee that life will be smooth then! But if one has earned enough strength and mettle, jumping over hurdles may not be a big problem! The determination...... and conviction....'I will not be broken' is what is so important! A poignant write!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 September 2015

'll stay on the road I've chosen and face all my fears. I will not be broken I've come too far in these years.........nicely envisioned and strongly depicted. A beautiful poem I like most. Thanks for sharing......10

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 11 September 2015

I 'll stay on the road I 've chosen, And face all my fears. Truly, headstrong and stubborn Loved reading and commenting.....10

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