Damn it! Love, you
Hurt me again.
This is the 4th time,
I have found my lover,
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Love is so strong..........it will conquer you and your friend again...........Good Write.10+++.........
Love once again strikes... It can be very harsh... This poem I like, it talks about what love can sometimes do to a person. I can hurt forever and make someone never love again.
This is beautifully written, Eyan. I enjoyed the flow of thoughts, and the tone.
i quite like this although i am not a fan of using numbers rather than words but i guess thats just a personal opinion - 10
stealing from a famous lines of a poet on her.. significantly penned.... tell her that she would find thee love she want in the one that does not take her to bed, until thye both arre wed.. and that is the man of virtue.
Betrayal, broken heart, it is a topic known well, not only in the poetry. The life is showing its large sharp claw sometimes and is wounding in the unpredictable way. This is with betrayal and inflicted consciously pain, whether not - but set. Love torments are able to weaken the man, and what's more to kill. Here the crying won't help and it isn't counting the amount of pleaded tears. They are so who forever are complaining oneself loves. Are also so who are forgiving and are coming back to the partner. However nobody comes with a warranty and alone isn't giving it, that the fate for him then again won't play prank. It is just 'that's life'. Love and the betrayal often go out with themselves in steam. It is my reflection after reading your poems to the topic love of 'surprises'. I like your poems, the one also. I am greeting :) Maria Barbara Korynt
Its really sad poem...laid out very well, last verse is really good.
Love at only phisical level more often than not leads to such frustrations!
addicted to love, i see. of course, you'll fall in love again, because you're in love with love. thanks for writing this
somtimes love hurts much than a cutting knife this is why people have to be carreful all the time, don't knowing much who are the person you love is your fault
so good! ! it made me cry! ! i loved it... it rlly does relate
Love is cruel sometimes bro, but you'll love again. It's soul food, nice work keep'm coming 10
Love certainly is the best feeling on earth, yet it can be the worst.. Good write! Take care, Martine
well life is a concoction a cocktal so sadness and happiness closely follow each other lovely write :))
this poem speak in itself about the hurt and pain but love will not stop flowing from the hurt......... I like the entire theme and its write............