Wednesday, March 11, 2009

..I Will Never Fall In Love Again Comments

Rating: 5.0

Damn it! Love, you
Hurt me again.
This is the 4th time,
I have found my lover,
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Eyan Desir
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rago rago 07 July 2009

this poem speak in itself about the hurt and pain but love will not stop flowing from the hurt......... I like the entire theme and its write............

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Ben Gieske 06 April 2009

You express your feelings very strongly with this one.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 05 April 2009

Love is so strong..........it will conquer you and your friend again...........Good Write.10+++.........

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Joscelyn Alderdice 30 March 2009

Love once again strikes... It can be very harsh... This poem I like, it talks about what love can sometimes do to a person. I can hurt forever and make someone never love again.

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Lalay Allan 27 March 2009

This is beautifully written, Eyan. I enjoyed the flow of thoughts, and the tone.

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Gordon Wilkinson 21 March 2009

i quite like this although i am not a fan of using numbers rather than words but i guess thats just a personal opinion - 10

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stealing from a famous lines of a poet on her.. significantly penned.... tell her that she would find thee love she want in the one that does not take her to bed, until thye both arre wed.. and that is the man of virtue.

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Maria Barbara Korynt 17 March 2009

Betrayal, broken heart, it is a topic known well, not only in the poetry. The life is showing its large sharp claw sometimes and is wounding in the unpredictable way. This is with betrayal and inflicted consciously pain, whether not - but set. Love torments are able to weaken the man, and what's more to kill. Here the crying won't help and it isn't counting the amount of pleaded tears. They are so who forever are complaining oneself loves. Are also so who are forgiving and are coming back to the partner. However nobody comes with a warranty and alone isn't giving it, that the fate for him then again won't play prank. It is just 'that's life'. Love and the betrayal often go out with themselves in steam. It is my reflection after reading your poems to the topic love of 'surprises'. I like your poems, the one also. I am greeting :) Maria Barbara Korynt

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Kranthi Pothineni 15 March 2009

Its really sad poem...laid out very well, last verse is really good.

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Megan R 15 March 2009

I really like the rythm of this poem.

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Subbaraman N V 14 March 2009

Love at only phisical level more often than not leads to such frustrations!

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Yana Djin 13 March 2009

addicted to love, i see. of course, you'll fall in love again, because you're in love with love. thanks for writing this

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Kamel kamel 13 March 2009

somtimes love hurts much than a cutting knife this is why people have to be carreful all the time, don't knowing much who are the person you love is your fault

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Tiffany Border 13 March 2009

so good! ! it made me cry! ! i loved it... it rlly does relate

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~ Jon London ~ 12 March 2009

Love is cruel sometimes bro, but you'll love again. It's soul food, nice work keep'm coming 10

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Blue Eyes 12 March 2009

i love this kind of romantic poems and yours is one of the best.

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Martine Kolber 12 March 2009

Love certainly is the best feeling on earth, yet it can be the worst.. Good write! Take care, Martine

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Dorota Szumilas 12 March 2009

Broken heart, but with hope to true love...

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anurag duggal 12 March 2009

well life is a concoction a cocktal so sadness and happiness closely follow each other lovely write :))

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