Look O, traveller
Before dying
Put your dreams
In the care
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u`ve already made and they r wonderful. thx for sharing ur dreams and words
The images in this poem are creative and thought-provoking. You manage such honesty of vision and economy of words, my friend.
It is possible to esteem somehow this and another in the original?
Thought provoking and very original. Creatively written and deep. A poems poem. Thank you for sharing :)
O, Wise Poet, your words are listened with aged dreams left abandoned, neglect of care, friendship sails, un blown of wind upon treasured waters Grime, interment is but Earth's cleansing, Bequeath be this poesy of Love and Peace, Immortal are gifted flowers' fragrance, We are indeed, all travelers on a - Bon Voyage for an Eternity -Deserving collaboration, for your excellent, in-depth felt, spiritual poem ...louie levy Thank you for your review of my, 'A Black Rose' Sir, I am deeply touched,
Excellent. So short and yet filled to the brim with depth. H
Really beautiful words, full of hope and promise. Best wishes, Andrew
Thank you for writing such a beautiful poem, full of peace.
Such a lovely image Naseer. This would bring anyone into a state of peace
Wise words Naseer, as one thing ends another starts, 10 Lynda xx
Short and masterful with a title to match-dreams wind flowers, I hope I start again as a flower only I would'nt like to depend on the legs of a bee to complete my love, uavaniceday regards
I appreciate the first few lines when dreams are 'in the care of wind and water', , the 'putrid body' puts the dreams into an anticlimax of 'reality', , is romanticism jextaposed with reality here or why the traveler is given that treatment, , fine short poem, ,
We live on with the daisies we push from under...an inelegant thought, but, living on with the words that were woven from the looms of dreams is an awesome notion.
The hidden words or thoughts only spring out in the dreams. So, dreams can be interpreted in words, when one comes out of the dream.
A poem of profound wisdom and beauty.Your power to make words out of dreams is indisputable. You have a rare gift.10 without hesitation. Warm regards, Sandra
A dream of a poem...following natures path showing we all help to push up daises! said more tactful ofcourse, ++++10 regards