Friday, January 16, 2009

I Will Make Words Out Of Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

Look O, traveller
Before dying
Put your dreams
In the care
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir
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Ken E Hall 01 February 2010

A dream of a poem...following natures path showing we all help to push up daises! said more tactful ofcourse, ++++10 regards

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Anjali Sinha 17 January 2010

solid depth in this poem corpse--flowers- -10 anjali

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Emma Adamyan 31 October 2009

u`ve already made and they r wonderful. thx for sharing ur dreams and words

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Lillian Thomas 04 June 2009

The images in this poem are creative and thought-provoking. You manage such honesty of vision and economy of words, my friend.

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Sergey Yarutin 10 April 2009

It is possible to esteem somehow this and another in the original?

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Duh Huh 30 March 2009

Thought provoking and very original. Creatively written and deep. A poems poem. Thank you for sharing :)

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Tork Souad Diana 03 February 2009

wonderful..10+++++++++++++++++

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Louie -Love & Peace- Levy 30 January 2009

O, Wise Poet, your words are listened with aged dreams left abandoned, neglect of care, friendship sails, un blown of wind upon treasured waters Grime, interment is but Earth's cleansing, Bequeath be this poesy of Love and Peace, Immortal are gifted flowers' fragrance, We are indeed, all travelers on a - Bon Voyage for an Eternity -Deserving collaboration, for your excellent, in-depth felt, spiritual poem ...louie levy Thank you for your review of my, 'A Black Rose' Sir, I am deeply touched,

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Herbert Nehrlich1 30 January 2009

Excellent. So short and yet filled to the brim with depth. H

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Andrew Blakemore 27 January 2009

Really beautiful words, full of hope and promise. Best wishes, Andrew

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Patti Masterman 22 January 2009

Thank you for writing such a beautiful poem, full of peace.

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. . 22 January 2009

Such a lovely image Naseer. This would bring anyone into a state of peace

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Ivor Hogg 22 January 2009

Beautiful my friend.The ultimate in recycling

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Lynda Robson 21 January 2009

Wise words Naseer, as one thing ends another starts, 10 Lynda xx

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Ken E Hall 21 January 2009

Short and masterful with a title to match-dreams wind flowers, I hope I start again as a flower only I would'nt like to depend on the legs of a bee to complete my love, uavaniceday regards

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Sadiqullah Khan 20 January 2009

I appreciate the first few lines when dreams are 'in the care of wind and water', , the 'putrid body' puts the dreams into an anticlimax of 'reality', , is romanticism jextaposed with reality here or why the traveler is given that treatment, , fine short poem, ,

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Eddie Roa 19 January 2009

We live on with the daisies we push from under...an inelegant thought, but, living on with the words that were woven from the looms of dreams is an awesome notion.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 18 January 2009

The hidden words or thoughts only spring out in the dreams. So, dreams can be interpreted in words, when one comes out of the dream.

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Sandra Fowler 18 January 2009

A poem of profound wisdom and beauty.Your power to make words out of dreams is indisputable. You have a rare gift.10 without hesitation. Warm regards, Sandra

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sumaira .....ir 18 January 2009

Beautiful poem, it shows your good taste sir...

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