Tuesday, November 17, 2015

I Will Make It Comments

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Someday I will make it
Before this time can break me
I am brittle, I am cracked
A mirror that reflects many faces
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Nosheen Irfan
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Norah Tunney 29 June 2017

I can feel the trust and the hope underlying these beautiful inspiring lines.A poem to lift our spirits and help us on our way. It resonates with us all as we are all broken to varying degrees by the storms of life..I love how the poem builds up to the last wonderful lines but I will make it through the shadows of the night Thank you Nosheen

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 June 2016

With Positiveness! Nice work.

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Excellent in inspiration. I really like this!

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Manonton Dalan 07 January 2016

positive thought is a start to healing

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Shakil Ahmed 17 November 2015

a nice overtone of optimism pervades through out the poem, well-penned poem, i enjoyed reading the poem, thanks for sharing.

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Lahore, Pakistan
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