Wednesday, April 16, 2008

I Will Love You Comments

Rating: 4.2

For eternity I will love you
till the moon swallows the sun
and all is left is darkness
I will still love you.
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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 27 November 2017

Nice poem Khanyie, , , till the moon swallows the sun.. Like that line

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Bathoko Hadebe 03 January 2010

Verry good my sistar neh

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Gabi Ngubeni 14 May 2009

the guy has no clue how lucky he is to be a recipient of such pure love. Great write girl!

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Manonton Dalan 20 September 2008

powerful poem... go girl tell him. thanks for sharing.md

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Kefentse Sathekge 05 September 2008

heart warming poem. does he know you love him so much? if not, call him now :)

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Anthony Edmond John 19 August 2008

Hello Angel, How are you doing? I really love this one... Its sweet, passionate and S...Xy ha ha ha ha ha... I was thinking of us working together on your HIV/AIDS Project ok? Take care of yasef Angel..I need more Creative writings from your stables ok? Cheers Love... Anthony Edmond John +2348020984990

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James B. Earley 19 August 2008

Eternity is a very long time! A spiritual promise indeed. Excellent.

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hey sisters, true love will never die i like the spirit kip on writting. good work

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hey sisters, true love will never die i like the spirit kip on writting. good work

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Wanelisa Albert 11 July 2008

Amazing! i love it....full of confidence in the love that is there! well done gal

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Greenwolfe 1962 09 July 2008

This is more than a nice piece. I gave it a 9. GW62

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blue 802 09 July 2008

He had you in mind, nice piece

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Nina .a. 17 June 2008

I liked it, really nice w/ a beautiful msg. Nina ♥

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beauty in the writing, lovely poem thanks

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Lungelo Mbatha 19 April 2008

Finally! I've been waiting to see one of your pieces! This is passionate powerful and sweet- a nice write- I look 4ward to seeing more! ...CheerZ!

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Nkululeko Mdudu 16 April 2008

I am impressed by the acknowledgement that love itself is a creation from heaven, I look foward to reading more. kind regards: Nkululeko Mdudu

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