Wednesday, July 23, 2008

I Will Love U Till.... Comments

Rating: 4.0

I LOVE U AND THE PAIN
THAT U CAUSE INVAIN
THAT U BROUGHT TO MY HEART
AND MY HEART HAD TO OBTAIN
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Tareq Jalabi
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 14 June 2010

Fantasy love poem…jockeyed nicely…yea beloved will be yours always...i trust much Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Akram Awadat 01 October 2009

fantastic poem, well done 10+

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The Understander 15 September 2009

Well written,10/10.

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Adriana C 11 September 2009

sensitive poem, love is so painful sometimes!

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Carol Gall 27 May 2009

you are a very good writer its from your heart

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Fatima Shahzad 26 May 2009

nice..nice.....wow...thts amazing! ! ! ..

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~*~Secretive Shelby~*~ 14 April 2009

Some real powerful lines in there. Like the one about the train. Impressive, unique, different writing style...i like it! Scale1-10...10!

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Miriam Maia Padua 09 March 2009

wow...eternal love... I WILL LOVE U TILL THE TRAIN COMES TO MY SOUL AND BREAK ITS CHAIN TILL MY HEART FEELS NOMORE CHRIST`S PAIN ....and Christ; s pain will never cease.....so with your love.... very sweet expression of great love... the words are so touching.... 10++++

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Brenda Arroyo 13 January 2009

Amazing... And to this I say AMEN! : ]

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 30 December 2008

A great poem filled with emotion! I enjoy reading it!

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Marria Attar 23 November 2008

Great Poem..full of love.. :)

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Nikki Clevenger 18 November 2008

I hear your pain and emotion in this very loudly, very nice poem

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Rachael Miroddi 23 September 2008

Your love poems are amazing and I can relate/identify with each and everyone of them. I would really like to see you write about other subjects because I beleive expanding your thinking tends to be very helpful! ! ! I look forward to reading more from you, keep up the good work blue eyes!

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Tatianna Rei Moonshadow 30 August 2008

love is like that... painful... but the test of love is pain... if you're willing to endure agony, you know its for real

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Lourdes Schopenhauer 06 August 2008

I like the kitchiness. Its beat. If it was meant to be, I dont know, but it works and could just as well be made into a gigantic goldcrusted porcelain figure in my hidden town any day. Jeff Coons would have been translucentgreen with envy!

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Liliana Negoi 05 August 2008

interesting comparison here...the pain of your love is as deep as Christ's pain? ! :)

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Blessing Nanier 05 August 2008

it is soo. soo romantic

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 02 August 2008

I enjoy this poem written by you. Keep up your good work!

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Wadeema Ali 30 July 2008

perfect not only perfect excellent

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