I LOVE U AND THE PAIN
THAT U CAUSE INVAIN
THAT U BROUGHT TO MY HEART
AND MY HEART HAD TO OBTAIN
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Some real powerful lines in there. Like the one about the train. Impressive, unique, different writing style...i like it! Scale1-10...10!
wow...eternal love... I WILL LOVE U TILL THE TRAIN COMES TO MY SOUL AND BREAK ITS CHAIN TILL MY HEART FEELS NOMORE CHRIST`S PAIN ....and Christ; s pain will never cease.....so with your love.... very sweet expression of great love... the words are so touching.... 10++++
A great poem filled with emotion! I enjoy reading it!
I hear your pain and emotion in this very loudly, very nice poem
Your love poems are amazing and I can relate/identify with each and everyone of them. I would really like to see you write about other subjects because I beleive expanding your thinking tends to be very helpful! ! ! I look forward to reading more from you, keep up the good work blue eyes!
love is like that... painful... but the test of love is pain... if you're willing to endure agony, you know its for real
I like the kitchiness. Its beat. If it was meant to be, I dont know, but it works and could just as well be made into a gigantic goldcrusted porcelain figure in my hidden town any day. Jeff Coons would have been translucentgreen with envy!
interesting comparison here...the pain of your love is as deep as Christ's pain? ! :)
I enjoy this poem written by you. Keep up your good work!
Fantasy love poem…jockeyed nicely…yea beloved will be yours always...i trust much Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10