Too many times have I let my guard down to have my heart taken.
Too many times have I let my guard down to have my heart broken.
I was prepared to give her everything that I have,
I was prepared to give her all that I am.
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You know who this is right? Anyhow, so this was your first poem? Wow! It's not much of a looker or even much of a poem per se but it's emotion spilt onto the page and that's what's important in poetry. Emotion recollected in tranquility, or as I see it, emotion recorded in passion, makes for the best poetry. Fabulous!