Monday, July 14, 2008

I Will Live Comments

Rating: 5.0

Everytime my eyelids fall
Night after night in all my dreams
I see you, I feel you, and that is all
I need to know that my heart still screams
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Kyle Jones
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Beautifully written... But it makes me wonder who was the inspiration from...? Love it, just like all the others. -Trysta

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Janell Cressman 29 September 2009

an amazing poem! ! ! ! very well written

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Angelic Warrior 19 June 2009

absolutely beautiful...sounds like it should be a song..... :) .....i love it 10+++

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 14 April 2009

a poignant poem..well versed and an outstanding poem great job

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Nangula Immanuel 13 April 2009

Great stuff! ! perhaps you could read some of mine N.N.

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Iveta Petrova 23 December 2008

10 from me (',) well done again

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Iveta Petrova 23 December 2008

beautiful poem written with heart loved it well done

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Heather S 18 November 2008

this poem is so wonderful i love it -heather

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Stephanie Saba 16 October 2008

very beautiful poem! ! ! ! ! 10!

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Ryan Thompson 10 October 2008

ahhhhhh... this was soo nice great job really! !

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Ashraful Musaddeq 11 September 2008

Nice poem with a beautiful ending.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 23 August 2008

....finely composed........thanks

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Shalini Kts 14 August 2008

nice poem with much of emotions

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Evaughn Gray 16 July 2008

that almost made me cry..i'm so sorry..~Heart Broken Eva,

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Delilah Miller 14 July 2008

There was another layer in this poem that I can't quite figure out. Maybe it's all black and white as it's written to sound, but I think you put another emotion into it and I like it. Great job

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Marvin Brato 14 July 2008

Hoping for a loved one to come back and state the world 'I Love You' after you parted ways is quite remarkable.... for true love never dies! High marks.

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Kyle Jones

Kyle Jones

Tegucigalpa: Honduras: Carribean
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