Everytime my eyelids fall
Night after night in all my dreams
I see you, I feel you, and that is all
I need to know that my heart still screams
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absolutely beautiful...sounds like it should be a song..... :) .....i love it 10+++
a poignant poem..well versed and an outstanding poem great job
There was another layer in this poem that I can't quite figure out. Maybe it's all black and white as it's written to sound, but I think you put another emotion into it and I like it. Great job
Hoping for a loved one to come back and state the world 'I Love You' after you parted ways is quite remarkable.... for true love never dies! High marks.
Beautifully written... But it makes me wonder who was the inspiration from...? Love it, just like all the others. -Trysta