I Will Leave You Silently Comments

Valerie, Absolutely beautiful - more than touching. Bravo!

this one is amazing Val. really awesome. loved it. my fav lines, I won’t stir you from your sleep, You’ll not see me cry - I will leave you silently When I say goodbye.

No you wouldn't Not with our a fight I will keep my eyes open Even in the middle of the night Well done my friend!

A shout of silence that breaks the heart with tears that screams: Please don't leave me that way! Well done my friend!

A delicate and sensitive poem, beautifully understated

Hello poet Valerie. This was a beautiful and enchanting poem. I enjoyed, LOyd

Sometimes we feel like leaving silently, like just disappearing. In these moments there is no fear, no pain, no sadness Just that enormous longing. a longing to step out We may get out for a while but then our God sends us back Back to complete our task, to share our feelings a little more to make some more positive differences in a hungry world to create more smiles and love some more, The above is just about a train of thoughts that welled up in me after reading this wonderful poem.

The sad notes of the song bird of the site...i love your effortless, natural poems! ! !

I do not see sadness in these words, I see beauty. Well written Valerie for writing is the kindest way to express your heartache. A giant Aussie Mothers Day Hug to You x

Beautiful with love kissing pain, both come in one write_Soul

Beautiful write with such wonderful imagery!

What a way to go! It is my wish too. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

A fantastic piece with wonderful images

Wow this is very captivating, ith a limited number of words you could create an amazing theme applicable for people with emotions, such a theme benig carried away with a smooth rhyme scheme. Well done, keep pening.

Did not like it, We all love you and need you and Hate the idea of you leaving. Don't you dare, Leave this site all bare! ! !

A wonderful flowing poem with a sadness to it. A great write.

These days you are talking about leaving, departing, going etc? Why Val? I cannot say I like this poem, I like the other version...

very nice.with sweet rhyming.liked it.