Sunday, September 10, 2006

I Will Hold You Forever Comments

Rating: 5.0

I could hold you forever,
close to my heart
I could kiss you forever,
our lips, never to part....
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Heather Moreton
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Brian Dorn 01 January 2007

Beautiful write, Heather... so brilliant in its brevity! Brian

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Amanda Lukas 10 September 2006

A beautiful and heartwarming poem. A definite 10. Still very short yet very powerfull.

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Catastrophe King 10 September 2006

And I will hold this poem for a complete 10. What an absolutel class yet short - The words have that piercing effect.

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Heather Moreton

Heather Moreton

Glasgow, Scotland
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