Sunday, August 28, 2016

I Will Gladly Lay Flowers Comments

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When I finally find your grave
I will gladly lay flowers on it
I will gladly say goodbye
I will gladly say rest in peace
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LINET SABASTIAN
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Mark Otieno 24 August 2017

Love hurts but somehow we all look for it....I like this piece

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Linet Sabastian 24 August 2017

True, much as it hurts we all look for it and yes we all need it. Thanks for reading.

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Karen Kerubo 28 October 2016

A mix of emotions of love, disgust and hate at the same time.

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Linet Sabastian 29 October 2016

Thank you Karen

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Faith Waweru 24 September 2016

nice poem that depict true feelings of a jilted person emotions

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Swalleh Ndeda 19 September 2016

so sad at the same time so loving , a masterpiece combination of both emotions.

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Linet Sabastian 19 September 2016

Thanks for reading Swalleh.

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Rose Kanana 28 August 2016

Quite deep for the 'honest lair' When i finally find your grave then i will be sure That you are gone with your lies That you are gone with your dirty games That you are gone with your empty words.

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Ramin Chaman 28 August 2016

Beautifully penned. Thank you for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 August 2016

Flower lies on grave finally with emotion of sadness and still spreads fragrance in honor. Amazing poem is shared.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 August 2016

Gone with your lies! ! Thanks for sharing.

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