I Will Call Your Name, Skepi Comments

A good write! Comments of Mr. Ravi A may be considered seriously.

As a love poem, this is okay but only the theme of love doesn't make the complete sense of poetry. I come across with a lot of love poems. The central theme remins the same and it gives the sense of repetition. Look around you and you can find umpteen themes to write about. Read good poetry and you will come to know how to present your verse. Reading, writing and editing our own works- only with it, good poetry is ever born. I do a lot of editing work to my own poetry before every poem is posted. Read and read. There is no replacement to it. Then, there is a stage of digestion. Then, there is a stage of reproduction. Surging winds will wake deep within. We can find our own simple and effective language to present our theme. Best of luck