I Will Call You Heaven Comments

such a sweet poem :)

such a sweet poem :)

Oh...what a sweet poem

Your poem is very beautiful. I look forward to reading more of your poems.

I love this lines. You need me like sweet water You want me more than anyone You miss me when I'm away I'm your most happiness and fun

Gud piece. Thanks for sharing.

and i will call you my favorite poet. the real beloved act s like a real friend. thankenstein~nb

2 last verses can make crazy every heart. bravo! its being felt deep

Asif, this is so brilliant. the word Heaven remember me lots of things. good work well doen

Very nice love poem - good one Asif.

I like this one and it makes yours flow all in one direction, and that is towards God's love

Nice poem with wonderful thought.

well defined imagery. Nice to read..very emotive and well decorated. Thanks for sharing a lovely poem..

Beautiful imagery with great rhythm and flow, loved it Asif!

So sweet. It gave me a good feeling. Thanks for making me smile!

lovely poem, ill rate it as a 10. its nice and different. it caught my eye. good write.

Wonderful poem Asif. Recommending!

fantastic well done u the hawk of love

very romantic set the mood to the happiness and take you dream place lovely thank you for sharing sir payal