Saturday, June 8, 2013

I Will Become Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love Me
for what i am not
and I will become.
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Captain Cur
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Anjandev Roy 05 April 2021

Brilliant

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 July 2018

yes love has the force to create a new being.. here personally a new you...... it is true.. thank u dear poet. tony

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Danny Draper 24 October 2013

I love this not for what it is, but for what it is not.

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Alookh (matin) 14 September 2013

LOVE this one! ! ! ! ! WOoooooow........i love ur works: D

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Farah Ilyas 02 July 2013

nice, short but very sane in nature like sage saying. brillliant

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Patricia Grantham 23 June 2013

I must say this short write is really good.capt. A little says a whole lot. Good lines.

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Patricia Grantham 23 June 2013

I must say this short write is really good.capt. A little says a whole lot. Good lines.

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Heather Wilkins 19 June 2013

nice, short sweet and to the point. nice read

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Shahzia Batool 16 June 2013

an example of diversity in your poetry! ! !

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David Wood 13 June 2013

Thats the way to go Captain.

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Payal Parande 12 June 2013

Gravitation is not responsible for people falling in love. -Albert Einstein bravo sir..........

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 12 June 2013

Captain, I think what you say is better than loving for what one is then becomes different. You expressed a lot in a few words.

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Yasmin Khan 12 June 2013

Love has power to change us, terse and brief with deep meanings.

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Unwritten Soul 12 June 2013

Love you what you are not but only with a good one and not to be something we like not _Soul

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R.j. Wynn 11 June 2013

Beautiful man, spit it out.

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Heather Wilkins 11 June 2013

Nice, short and sweet Captain Cur.

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Jahan Zeb 11 June 2013

The last line says a lot. Short simple and very nice.

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Wahab Abdul 10 June 2013

lovely, i take the hit of the humour...

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Ambrosia A 09 June 2013

Wow, a great haiku. Only a true lover dare to change himself.

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