Tuesday, July 21, 2009

I Will Be More Than What I Am Comments

Rating: 3.8

Even the storms’ blow seems so strong,
Oh I want that peace to come how I long.
Oh when shall these stormy days end
Yes, I don’t have a very strong hand
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Obed dela Cruz
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Isaac Maliya 08 August 2009

This is really nice. Inspiring poem for all to read in my opinion!

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Alex Rios 27 July 2009

This is a good poem.... I can tell your the one who doesn't show that your down and on the inside you're breaking down. I really like it! -Alex

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Ency Bearis 26 July 2009

a show of brevity...and confidence...a well written in poetic craftmanship....

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 25 July 2009

Very honest and inspiring. Your second stanza must have read 'frozen' not 'froen'? I could not find that word....on the whole it is a well-constructed poem.

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AkosiDArk Sugbuanon 21 July 2009

very heart felt poem there....Praise the Lord....and thanks to you Bro.

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Marvin Brato 21 July 2009

Very inspiring write portraying courage!

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Obed dela Cruz

Obed dela Cruz

Marikina City
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