Monday, June 28, 2021

I Will Be Extinguished Comments

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If someone blows with love

I will be extinguished,
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Shakira Nandini
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Luis A. Estable 28 June 2021

It`s hard to see what all tis means. You or the voice of the poem will be extinguished. How so? I do not see the connections here. I think the lines beg for much improvement.

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