Thursday, January 22, 2009

I Will Always Wait For You Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was the morning when she turned,
to have a look, such simple curiosity.
It spelled the end, she entered endless time,
I would, if asked by fate (Oh how I yearned!)
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Kris Smith 03 February 2009

Enjoyed this fine piece of verse H so nicely put together 10+++ Chris

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Fay Slimm 03 February 2009

There never is an end to genuine love - - true and stated well - and therefore it must be defended, and fought for as in all ages - - this poem cries with pathos and appeal - - it is so well penned it involves the reader in its own turmoil.... emotive read....... Fay

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Anita Atina 22 January 2009

Wonderful poem H. So much emotion wrapped in such a short space!

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Fiona Davidson 22 January 2009

Excellent poem Herbert...enjoyed the read thanks...Fi

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