Monday, February 12, 2007

I Will Allow... Comments

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I will allow myself
To wallow in that muck
Called self pity
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Dee Daffodil
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Duncan Wyllie 29 April 2007

For this spirit that's within Cannot be broken A stead-fast and spiritualy brilliant piece of rising from the ashes, AWESOME LINES, DEE Love duncan X

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C.R. Ebowski 24 February 2007

This reminds me of the phoenix, stark with emotion yet when all is lost, it reinvents itself and rises from the fire. Very nicely written.

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Esther Leclerc 20 February 2007

That's right, feelings and loss have got to be balanced with action and recovery! Fight on, Dee... Est : ]

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As I was reading this I was formulating comments which you answered as I read further. I completely agree. It's the best way to be if you can. You have to feel these things to know what it feels like. Oh waiter! Another large slice of life please! Ez

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Ted Sheridan 19 February 2007

The poetry you write makes me feel like I know something about you....that is always a good thing when we discover there is more to someone than just a name. I admire your honest approach.

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Francesca Johnson 14 February 2007

This is one of the most open and human poems I have read in a long time. You are allowing yourself to feel all these emotions (therapeutic) instead of suppressing them, and setting yourself a time limit (being strong and mature) . Dee, this has got to be one of your most inspirational poems and I will add it to my favourites to read when I am feeling angry / self pitying. A truly great piece, in my opinion. Love, Fran xxx

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Diane Violet 12 February 2007

Awesome poem Dee....love it!

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C.R. Ebowski 12 February 2007

Dee.....I love it. Excellent poem!

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Tranquil Ocean 12 February 2007

I can see a never dying spirit....Love it! ! ! ! ! TO

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Impossible Princess 12 February 2007

Love this poem, there are shadows of Still I rise by Maya Angelou, always love a fighting spirit. Great poem. IP x

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Ted Sheridan 12 February 2007

I love a good attitude! You certainly display one with this. No quit!

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