I Will Comments

Yes. You will. But always.. Cheers. Subroto

very nice you handled the river well

Will I? To I will! A question mark and an exclamtion mark might add to your thought. Just an idea. :) Good Work. DC

Oh my! This is an honor to me. I am filled with happiness. Mmmmmm! I love this poem. One thing...You write 'cursing' the distance? To me 'cursing' has a negative shadow surrounding it. Consider a more positive side, maybe like embracing, or challanging, meeting, or communicate, learn patience with, or gather strength from. Showing love to the distance, teaching the cursed moment... Only a suggestion. I am with pride now. You honor me with your poem! DC

wonderfully penned.. 'I will' two very strong words.....10 for dis.

Lovely piece Nikunj....10 of course