Wednesday, January 21, 2009

I Will. Comments

Rating: 5.0

i will go far,
i will be a star,
i will succeed,
i will not smoke weed,
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JOSE MURGUIA
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Julie Dant 02 March 2009

Nothing but positive feelings conveyed to the reader. Very uplifting.

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Sunflower Field 13 February 2009

I liked the over all message of it. Good job.

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Allan Macli Borges 30 January 2009

I will congratulate you and give you a 10! good piece for its message..

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Kite Remedy 30 January 2009

positive and strong.. a fiery write you have here..

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Shay Riggin 21 January 2009

i will- what a great piece of art! i loved how you in such a short poem taught me who you are and where your standards lie. your determination shows me you will go far. good luck keep writting!

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I will have to say you did awesome on this poem.. I love the flow and the ring to it.. great piece Jose Krista

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