Friday, September 29, 2006

I Will Comments

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I'll write...if only I've words
that will frame you perfectly
within each intellectual turn
- a poetry perhaps of a certain form
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reinalie jorolan
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Gina PrettyBrownEyes 06 October 2006

the idea of heartake portrayed in a new way. i liked how you encorperated all these different things: singing, dancing, etc, in the poem. makes it seem more real. yays for you

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Poet Dragon 29 September 2006

Wow, that was a beautiful read, excellent rhyme, comfortable meter, and a great backbone of adoration. Keep writing!

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reinalie jorolan

Ozamiz city, Philippines
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