I'll write...if only I've words
that will frame you perfectly
within each intellectual turn
- a poetry perhaps of a certain form
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Wow, that was a beautiful read, excellent rhyme, comfortable meter, and a great backbone of adoration. Keep writing!
the idea of heartake portrayed in a new way. i liked how you encorperated all these different things: singing, dancing, etc, in the poem. makes it seem more real. yays for you