Monday, October 30, 2006

I Whisper My Love......... Comments

Rating: 5.0

My sacred love......
like a bubble in a running stream
really like nectar in a withering flower
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Kolitha Lelwala
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Sandra Fowler 30 October 2006

Very nice imagery in this one. A whisper is more subtle than a shout. Fine work, Kolitha. Regards, Sandra

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Nimal Dunuhinga 30 October 2006

Definitely somebody would hear your whisper as it's so adventurous and melodious.

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