Wednesday, August 23, 2006

I Wept For... Comments

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I wept for the dying of my innocence
Hanging precariously from a broken moon
I swirled in the dance of the spiraled flame
Connections dripping, dangling…teasing
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A.J. McKinley
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Lylyanna Pilewski 24 August 2006

I really liked it it's sad like there are sad things that you read and love but this one is I've lost something sad. It's good I like it. Lylyanna

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A.J. McKinley

A.J. McKinley

Indiana, United States
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