Sunday, May 7, 2006

I Wept For The Loss Of You My Love Comments

Rating: 4.8

When I was young, I saw happy ever after in your eyes.
The stars reflected in your auburn hair, and new horizons
sprang eternal every morning with sunlit skies.
Such dreams danced in my every heartbeat, and new joy,
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William Jackson
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Jerry Hughes 26 May 2007

...exquisitely described loss of a loved one

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Will Barber 13 May 2006

This is terrific (in both senses) , the words tumblimg and wounding. Ah well, without a wound we'd never need to grow wise, and heal. This really moved me. You are a very good servant to the divine, bringing messages to us all.

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Geoff Warden 08 May 2006

this is a relatible sentiment, Well written my friend

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Francesca Johnson 08 May 2006

William, I agree with Trish, very sad. I wish I could give you a hug. Fran xx

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trisha evensen 08 May 2006

this is a very beautiful but sad poem

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William Jackson

William Jackson

San Antonio, Texas
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