Sunday, September 7, 2008

I Went To A Ball Comments

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I went to a ball the other day,
We had such a feast!
There was Caterpillar pie, butterfly Wings
Bread and Butter Beasts, ants on sticks
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Pamela lutwyche
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John Thorkild Ellison 12 October 2008

Very imaginative and entertaining. Lots of fun! Well done! ! Perhaps you would like my poem 'Graveyard Kiss'. Best wishes, John.

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Dee Daffodil 10 October 2008

What a wonderful imagination you have! ! ! ! Another incredible poem full of tasty tidbits! Hugs, Dee

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Anthony Edmond John 12 September 2008

Hello Cheerie, I love this Lines...Well aligned and savoury. Anthony Edmond John +2348020984990

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Ashraful Musaddeq 08 September 2008

An enjoyable descriptive poem.

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