**i Welcome Your Stab *********... Comments

i'm hoping this is a joke or SOMETHING. being the first of your poems i have read i am disappointed to say the least. dots. GOOD one.

i likes this....its silent yet expressive.....peaceful and at the same time full of meaning :)

Subsubtle and written in white ink on white paper…... dr.sakti

it is just more than a brave topic from you

this one is new way to express a emotion but I dont welcome any stab regardless it is deserving 10

To be read in the pixels dots. More dots = better clarity. Here it is.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................. and so on Nice ten Ms. Nivedita. UK Thanks for kind comments on my poems and educative too. Please read my poems with same educative comments as I’m a nascent one niv

so here my beautiful post showed me how many play in my back yard of course those one whom rated me 2 or one and it seems some one God bless him rated me three..those are not from who commented to me, those are hidden hands..wishing that wise people understand why i did saw, , do you see now..smart enough and you will discover what is going on...regards...

a poetic silence........a dialogue with eternity. CP

wow! ! this is new! ! amazing! ! hahahaha

where are the words? ..are they edited? ..ooouuuchhhhh...my gosh...whew...its so hard to interpret this in telecommunications.......dot...dot...dot..dot...10 4 .......nice dear tamara...hhhhmmmmm...lav this....ur so lucky today coz my naughtiness has been controlled, , , waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.......

From Charles B. blank page to my human being series of point and symbols here you come from a continous periods.............Thanks for this welcoming stab! ! !

nice work Tamara...you never told me you know the Braille system :) but..please parry the stab....don't be hit...do some Aikido :)

NEW STYLE... NOT A USED STYLE

Maybe because I know of someone who longs to be stabbed (by me) , that I can understand this sentiment. It might seem strange to someone who has never longed to be so stabbed.

Interesting experimental piece, Tamara

Only gold barley.. long with the wind.. and as millions... of long spears... offering up there... the tops to the moon.. at night.. like hair did they..iip