Wednesday, November 27, 2013

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the night fall
silent like a
broken shadow
gone headlong
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Ben Partenay
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Khairul Ahsan 06 March 2014

Loved reading your poem. It is power packed with passion. The last stanza ignites a spark!

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Morawn Higgs 21 December 2013

Very sensual. I liked it. Thanks for the comment (on one of my poems) , by the way.

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