Saturday, August 1, 2009

I Watch The Moon From My Maple Tree Comments

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As I watch the moon
So quietly
From high above
In my maple tree
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Miranda Van Yperen
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Darla Holt 01 August 2009

Miranda, this is beautiful. I like the way you described the moon and stars dancing the night away. What a lovely scene to watch from your maple tree.

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Wesley Mincin 01 August 2009

Creative. It's...sweet.

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Obinna Eruchie 01 August 2009

'The moon is the sun/ That shines in the dark', interesting, the lines suggest the moon rules the sky at night, while the sun rules the sky at day. Good piece.

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