Tuesday, July 10, 2018

I Watch The Monsoon Clouds Comments

Rating: 5.0

I watch the monsoon clouds
Coming closer to my land to
Alight as rain with a soft sound;
To mingle with rivers and streams
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Ruta Mohapatra 10 July 2018

The truant monsoon disappoints. Nicely penned!

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Anil Kumar Panda 11 July 2018

I am glad you liked the poem. Thanks for comment. Gratitude.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 July 2018

It is really a beautiful poem on rain and monsoon clouds having thrilling expression and amusing diction. Fine penmanship. Each and every line is interesting to read. I quote some lines here..... I watch the monsoon clouds Gathering over my land in slow Paces bearing inside them much rain; To look dark through day and night To fill the air with sweet musical notes To go on dancing along valley and plain. Thanks.10

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Anil Kumar Panda 11 July 2018

Thanks very much Sir. I am very much feel honored for the wonderful review.

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