~ I Watch I Watch I Watch ~ Comments

poetic art at the highest

Ye, Silent Universe Silent Dark, Silent Light Embosom Your foot prints When minstrel oozing From Your harp. Achefully Joyfully I watch I watch I watch Without any utterance Without any hope. - - -A mesmerizing piece of writing.

very good words...........

I'm definitely immersed within the universe and to me that is a Blessing as there is much to love and share. The beyond has always been intriguing to me. Excellent poem Nivedita.....

I can identify with your feelings for I am indeed 'a lost soul' 'standing beyond the boundaries of Life and Death' and yes- I watch I watch I watch Without any utterance Without any hope.' your poem has an erie quality to it, very effective

Nicely work short piece that opens up the thought of watching something of great purpose coming. Good work.

I also watch the endless dark light night of universe expanding silences eternally talk to me speak with me flows forth my soul

The beauty of the world around us. In silence we all take it in and watch. This is deep with lots of meanings. Thanks for sharing

This was a very intense piece, very well conceived...

I watch, i watch, i watch........it is all that you can do......the magnitude of it all is overpowering......10

Has a prophetic touch to it. Reminds me of the ever extending universe, and the continual watchfulness of our God! Omniscience.: D

Beautifully written lines that conveys both the sorrows and bliss of life beyond the realms of petty thoughts. The simplicity of words is what i like the most. Keep sharing, niv. just keep sharing.

Cooooooooooooool! make me chill because too cooold and cool...love this, u know what, i think ur imagination and reality are twin...identical twin, different but reflective...you always know how to attract people to read...like i said before u are exhibiting your drawing of mind into a piece of chain word...still beautiful without color! 10/10...

nice wordings here maam...

Fantastically true feeling when you are alone. Dear niv this is the best poem probably you have ever written. couched in so short and pithy expressions....

You’re standing in the: Endless Universe, Endless Dark, Endless Light. very great imagination.. thinking of the universe from this planet earth. thank you for ur meditation

Sometime situations go beyond our control when we have to simply watch, watch and watch out of frustration.

A mystical poem with charm and beauty of silence, very well written! I rate 10/10

'A softly sunken vision, the bottomless pit of darkness Mortals dare to look beyond the abysmal end Riding thy myriad ways of guiltless germination Capitulating under disgrace, yet amazed by the trend' I am sorry this is a bit sarcastically nasty maybe, but your poem encapsulates the entire universe, and my mind.

Try one I have written... Figment.