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that was very good i really enjoyed it

mary...never enjoyed a poem so much...fantastic...you write so well that ita a pleasure to read...hats off to you...love nalini

Ooohhhh! ! ! ! That is so moving and sad. I'm really crying Mary. I love pigs, they are wonderful creatures, they have such lovely characters. God bless Rosie wherever she is now. I hate to see animals killed for any reason. Love Ernestine XXX

Hilarious... but not. How a piece about a pig could be so thought-provoking still has me scratching my head. An excellently crafted piece - especially considering it was written By Order! ! ! ! ! !

Only you, Mary, only you could take a subject like this and make me cry. Well done! Scarlett

I was reading both about Buddha and St. Francis, And the idea of non-injury back in 1985, I then saw A truck of pigs in an accident on the freeway, pigs Running across the freeway all scared. I decided that day, I would do my best to practice non-injury. Good poem, Mary.

good stuff nice intricate story...lovely poem.

A SAD, BUT ADORABLE WRITE...YOU CERTAINLY KNOW HOW TO REACH A READER&EMMERSE THEM WITHIN THE CREATIVE ELEMENTS OF YOUR WORK, , , NOT THE EASIEST OF TASKS...READING & BECOMING ENSCONCED IS THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN A GOOD POET & ONE THAT CAN BE CONSIDERED ACCOMPLISHED...THE ABOVE WORK, BY MY STANDARDS IS AN ACCOMPLISHED LITERARY WORK....''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK

Awwwww. How sweet - and sort of gruesome too.

Aww what a sweet and saddening poem! New and interesting topic as well. ~Amber~