Wednesday, November 13, 2019

I Was Told Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was told, that my joy
Is my joy alone and my sadness
Is mine alone: such is life.
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Mj Lemon 22 December 2019

This is brilliance, AB. We are told so many things. Where are the people who lead by example? A 10!

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Susan Williams 25 November 2019

I fell in deep like for your last stanza! ! ! ! The other stanzas had a similar melancholy and yes wise tone and that set me up for the humor in the last one. Well done, my friend! ! ! 10+++++++++++++++

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Michael Walker 15 November 2019

'The truth shall set you free'. that's if you can find it. A poem which encapsulates the wrong advice others may give us. Only experience teaches this, as your glittering poem implies.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 November 2019

A brilliant tercet powerfully expressed! I liked the third stanza most.........Top score!

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A B Faniki 14 November 2019

Thank you so much for this lovely comment.: -)

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