I Was There Comments
To a Brother a gentle voice was heard. You have taken the freedom of another and yet you walk freely among the sons. Behold the faithful witnesses of your brother.
I am justice, I was there. I was there when you took away the freedom of another and to you I will work my mischief as you did on the innocent.
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A sterling display of passion and power through the Silent Word...If I could, might I suggest you consider breaklining this fine work to refine the stanzaic structure into shorter lines with the appropriate breaks...It's just an IMO...I think it would flow smoother, more mellifluously and give your audience a more poetic read as opposed to a prosaic read. Either way...it's impressive work, and I enjoyed the read ~FjR~
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7/27/2025 8:26:14 AM # 1.0.0
frank Ryan, I will try it. Thank you